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Designer: Beps
Created: 10. May 2009 20:51 CEST
Updated at: 01. February 2010 15:21 CET
Lab: Designlab
Description: I would greatly appreciate any feedback! Please let me know what you like and dislike about my design.




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Bine wrotes over 2 years ago

Nothing for me- so only 1 point for this design!

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gonin wrotes over 2 years ago

the girl in the front is cool. heads behind are bold. heads would look better just without color filling only with outlines.

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michael wrotes over 2 years ago

hi beps, welcome to the lab!

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Beps wrotes over 2 years ago

Thank you for the advice gonin! I agree with your observation and have changed my design accordingly.

Bine, what exactly do you dislike about my design?

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gonin wrotes over 2 years ago

much better! about her hand, is it a cigarette? smoke or finger outlines would make it more clear.

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Bine wrotes over 2 years ago

Sorry for answering so late! After the changes I like your design much more, so this was a good input from gonin:) For me- to be honest the woman in the front is too powerful! Maybe it would be better to give this girl another colour?
Have a nice day and greetings from Austria!



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